perhaps someone under 13 years old
Make up your mind which line of thought you are going to follow with the story. It seems something has been decided between the two main characters when what immediately follows is an inconsistent dialogue, completely contrary to what is to be expected. Very exasperating and repetitious.
Narration sounds rote, without understanding. However having said that, it is a such a convoluted story line that it would be hard to sound otherwise.
It is hard to imagine a less integrated and annoying book
A voice that could be listened to.
Trying to get into the story line and being unable to concentrate on it. How can all the characters have voices changing in adolescence? Dick Hill's voice is one thing but all his attempts to change that voice is unbearable.
I have no idea what the book is even about.
I love long books but this was too poor to even get a feeling for the story.
While this is a very admirable book, the voice of the author is dreadful. The book should be done again in a voice with a more natural flow and some enthusiasm. This flat tone coming from the author of a book who's story he should know, almost puts one to sleep. We could not listen to it after 10 minutes. I got the book for my grandchildren to listen to thinking they would enjoy it as I had enjoyed reading the book.
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