Hearing more about his childhood and current life. He veered off his tale filling in with his philosophical thoughts and musings. It is true that we all have free form thoughts as we walk around, his were too rambling to make for satisfactory reading and I did not find them particularly insightful or compelling. He seemed to have a hard time getting back to his story . It felt like he was trying to duplicate the somewhat vague feeling I get when I visit the past, but as he is a writer I was hoping for a more coherent, compelling story.
flat, but maybe that reflected the story
I would have cut way down on the philosophizing and musing.
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