You would have to rewrite it
They all lack depth and emotion.
This book was like a comic book from the 60s. The dialog was not realistic and it's obvious the author did not serve in a rifle company in any conflict zone.
Which exciting part, they were all good. Had to research many of the characters.
Simon of course
Did you relaize...?
The wording was flowery and hard to follow. It could have been because of the reader was so bad. Hard to tell.
No. I think I'll look for additionol stories that have not been told a thousand times before. In addition, some of the facts stated in this book have already been disproved.
A six year old could have presented more inflection is his voice to emphasize and convey some of the exciting parts of the book. Maybe a slight pause when you reach a period at the end of a sentence would help.
Dosome research into less known characters. Bring us stories we have not heard before.
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