This book was painful to finish and I almost didn't. Characters were stupid & unbelievable.
Plot didn't flow. Stephen WHites' early books were better.
She sounded like a very young, tipsy Valley Girl. Not the right choice for 50 Shades. In fact very bad choice. Detracted from the story.
Will not download rest of the trilogy w/ this narrator.
After Color of Law I was looking forward to his next book and wasn't disapointed. I thought this was a great story and enjoyed all the action, twist and turns. Couldn't figure out how it would end and like how he pulled it together.
I was expecting a great story but found it painful to read & almost quit. DeMille is a fine author but missed the mark on this one.
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