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The author labored with an incomprehensible plot, unbelievable in almost any context, so much so that it seem more of a cartoon than a novel. But, even more than Batman and the Joker, both the protagonists and the bad guy were thin caricatures, not of real persons, but of unlikeable comic strip heroes and villains. The story line jumped and had fits and starts (with no fun involved). I just wish it had stopped earlier, so I could erase it.
Don't make the character's voices so strained. It is sometime more difficult for a female voice actor to 'do' males; in Laual's case, she seemed more troubled by artificial distinctions between her female characters. The audio performance was likely hampered by the script.
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