Shows but does not tell. Was very dull and I love this topic. Passive voice and not at all entertaining.
Loved the book, was like watching at TV show with the amazing reading. Felt that some of the language was cliche and the analogies were well worn. IE "cut through them like paper." But this was not high art and, though predicatble, great fun. Stronger and more polished in the begining than toward the end.
Nice reading....for some reason some moron decided to put the sound of wind in the background. It is really unnerving to be in the middle of a chapter and have to hear all that garbage white noise. Couldnt get through any of it.
This was fun and light. The pacing was astoundingly good and the characters very real and funny. The reader made the material come alive even more and I was well entertained,listening to the story beyond my commute.
All in passive tense, very dull. Basic writing says you show dont tell. This was a snoozefest. I could not finish it.
All passive scenes
Less words. He repeats himself again and again.
Yeah, he was OK
A real snoozer. Does not work well in audio fromat
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