The descriptions were nice and the narration was superb! But most of all the way the character went back and forth with himself.
When the character told the reader that him and Alice had more in just a short time then most people had in a lifetime.
I am not an emotional person per say, but this story has a way of making you really rethink and analyze the emotions of the character.
This is a brilliant story! It opens and takes hold and doesn't let you go until the close. What a fantastically thought out and wonderful read!
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