I first encountered this narrator on a story where the protagonist was working undercover as a stoner, and his voice and reading style fit that very well. Here, it is very distracting and frustrating and strikes me as nails on a chalkboard.
The narration is very strange. Although there is a "full cast", people actually narrating their characters' lines is very inconsistent. Sometimes it is the character, sometimes it is the general narrator, and there doesn't seem to be very good logic as to when it is each person.
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