"Author lost site of retaining readers interest"
There is no nice way to give this critique- I feel annoyed, frustrated at the hours I wasted - hours and hours of listening to a book seeming to have its own mental breakdown! Why? far too many convoluted plots, unbelievably complicated scenarios, making no sense-
Did an Editor truly read this book before sending to production! I must salute the performers for being able to 'read' the content. This author should have considered writing 3 entirely separate novels or wait, is it 4 or 5 novels? Yep- There are that many "plots"
"confused"
What was the point of this audio? I am sorry but I don't understand your objective in having me listen to this- I would have preferred some useful information and guidelines in using audible.com- I am a new member and still trying to understand "it" all-
and what does this mean- (minimum 15 words and 25 characters, maximum 2000 characters)?????
Are you testing our level of observation?