Not this author
Anger and huge disappointment. When I heard the sample, I was very excited about this book. When I forced myself to finish it, I was so very anger at it. In "additional comments' I tell you why.
Here's the thing about this book. . .. the writing is not adult at all. It is unrealistic. The dialogue needs work.
I only bought this book because I wanted some semblance of Bared to You/50 shades. . .even though 50 shades writing was high school level.
This writing seems worse! I'm sorry but the characters are unrealistic, the story, and most of the scenes are unrealistic. I am a senior in college and I know that there are some people that do not lose their attitude/matturity of high school. However, most of our college lives we don't really have time for the stuff that goes on in this book. . .sure we party but we're mostly thinking about how we're going to pass these classes. It is either one of these two---sleep, social life or good grades. Abby has all of these. During the semester, every one is pulling their hair out to pass their classes. Everyone is worried. Sure there are people who party way too much, and some people that have a low maturity level---but to have a main character like this?! The heroine must be admirable to the romance reader, and the hero must be smoking hot! This hero was whiny as hell. . . . and the heroine was just dumb.
I do know that Abby is still a teenager---however all of the characters are immature!
If you take the tiny sex scene out then you would have a full young adult novel. The tone is all drama, very high school, when these characters are supposed to be transitioning into adults—or most likely adults. ---but teenagers would probably like this book.
Abby is not very admirable. She said somewhere in the book that she is indeed an idiot. Half the time she's dating both guys. Every character seems like they're an air head. The supporting character Mer---is the smartest person out of all of them.
I am so sorry to be mean, but as I listened to the book (and I did finish the book) I just became angrier and angrier that I wasted my credit on this kind of writing.
Although, the narrator did an amazing job in narrating this book---I would like my money back. . .
This is the 2nd book I've read/listened to by Saranna DeWylde. Love the sense of humor and romance. I'm definitely going to read more books by her.
EVERYTHING. The tension. The paranormal war. The Lore. The romance
I actually thought I would be bias that a man voiced a romance novel, but Robert was perfect. He's very talented.
Absolutely. I wish I could've, but I had to go to work.
One thing I did not like is that Cole left us with a cliffhanger for the next story. I HATE and LOVE that. I'm ready to buy the next one for that story, but it's not even out yet or titled!! No mention of it. :( So I guess I don't like that Cole left me with a craving for more, however, she reeled me in and I kind of want to buy all her books now. Good for me, bad on timing and the budget haha.
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