Well read and the voice matched the story
The plot was believable and interesting for a "guy". Am not so sure the gals will like this story as much....
Protagonist of course!
My only ding is the ending. I thought it could have been an hour longer and somehow tied the guy who murdered his wife into the whole thing...
Nicely accurate; scarily possible
As a Desert Storm fighter vet, my favorite scene was the large force attack package and engagements during the attack on China.
I'm not a critic; just liked this story, the way it was told, and the dream-like ending. Short and clever, logical fantasy, Interesting!
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