More character development was needed for this storyline to really "fly". The protagonists attention spans and the plot was flighty. Even the scenes where danger was imminent, there were on-going sexual innuendos and jokes.
Laurie King, Russell Series
Great depth and variety of voices - an engaging performer.
A lively quick pace.
Plot should have moved along at a better rate or at the very least, there should have been ample character development during the first ten chapters (I quit the book at this point). There wasn't anything gripping, interesting, or provoking and the characters were so surface, the reader didn't relate to them or care about them.
Boredom and annoyance
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