This was a predictable and intrigue-less composition. It was full of unnecessary details that seemed only to reflect the image that the author had in mind - perhaps of what she thought might be cute - i.e. a choice of wardrobe and accessories - who cares? It didn't lend anything to the story. No mystery, no suspense, no - nothing. I gave this 2 stars because this was an attempt to put together something noteworthy. Unfortunately, I did not find anything that was.
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