The story is OK, and I'm pretty sure I would like it much better if I had read it myself.
The narrator destroys this entirely. She adopts this voice for the main character that's coarse, old, and ignorant sounding. She seems to have no real idea where to put emphasis. She mispronounces things. She tries to put what I assume she feels is 'drama' into the performance and it's really amateurish and stilted.
The main character is supposed to be a bright younger woman and this read makes you think she's crabby old trash. Other characters, while read poorly, don't all sound so plain old coarse so I don't get it. Maybe she's trying to give her a hard-bitten edge? Baaaaad.
I have not checked but I hope to heaven the other books in the series are read by someone else.
It's maybe a little cliche. However, the narration really gets in the way of fair judgement.
It just needs someone else entirely. Narration is not for everyone.
I think the premise is good, and could develop well over time.
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