Cut short the story arc with the girls 6, 7 & 10. It was boring and dragged the book out. Entirely to much writing just to introduce 1 character.
Extend the arc with the boys and bring all the loriens together earlier rather than waiting for the end of the book to do it.
The fact that 4 and 6 would separate even if they had different agendas they are aliens being hunted and it makes no sense to me that they would split up. One of the two characters might not be happy but they would always stay together considering how hard they fought to find each other.
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