More consistent theme, better development of and coordination between the plot lines, and less focus on the romance which, while intriguing, was overplayed.
The invasion plot eventually drives the story, but the focus on interpersonal relationships in the mine, both romantic and platonic, took up most of the book.
LeFleur's reading was great.
I would cut about 80% of the romance scenes and add more about the invasion plot.
I'd pass on this book - there are better ones out there for your time and money.
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