Without the Pak Protectors it would underwhelm someone with no story line history. Much ado about nothing. Its just space species having a bad year. Where's the beef?
At least have some interaction with the Pak which showed their amazing mind/body/ characteristics while dominating those around them. Pak are the ultimate space entities that of course humans can relate to and have a power relation with.
OK, good development between voice styles. The reader did well keeping the various voices apart, it must have been a hard job to juggle them.
waiting for the main event (Pak involvement)
A quick follow up with a heavy space battle with most species and the Pak who have adopted Earth to protect.
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