Just because the protagonist is a good ol' boy from Texas, this doesn't mean that he is a rube! And, be assured, that's how the narrator plays the character. Distracting.
Finish the story as quickly as possible to limit the pain.
Not exactly 93 Kills nor Master Sniper.
Well written, complete (long), entertaining and well read ! Can I say more ?
It has already been done, well, and in a very truncated form.
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