Would you try another book from Edward M. Lerner and/or J. D. Hart?
Maybe
How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?
Get someone else to read it
How could the performance have been better?
Get someone else to read it
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Moonstruck?
I would streamline the beginning of the story.
Any additional comments?
NO