Her general plots and characters are not bad, but the immature dialogue can stand improvement. The swearing adolescent macho male werewolf attitude gets tiresome. I like the other characters, and that keeps me coming back for the rest of the series.
No, I do not think any of my friends would tolerate the immature characters.
If the angry macho males would grow up.
In many ways, well written. My only complaint is that there was not enough action and real plot. Most of the book was thoughts, dialog and sex. Sorry, but after a while, the sex is redundant and, well, boring. A little, or certainly less goes a long way. More action please!
I was hoping for an insight into her thinking and life. Instead, it is a rambling wandering comedic monologue...for three hours. I am fighting to get through it.
Write another book that is NOT a comedic monologue. We can watch her show for that.
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