Stilted dialogue, overly long explanations and slow moving. Poor narrarator.
Write it himself.
Accent and emphasis on wrong words.
Can't think of any
If this is the "future of Englidh crime fiction", God save the empire! Implausible charactors, vile language, sadistice torture, super hero, risies above all beatings and torture to forge ahead in the next page. Ugly!!
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