The book is a little slow. It really needs to pick up the pace and intrigue the readers interest. However, the voice makes it even more quiet and boring. It needs a little more oomph! Good ghost story but could be much better.
More character voice changes and more intonation changes in reading. It just needs more emotion with a voice that captures the reader.
Everything this author writes is awesome! It's got all the right features, a little supernatural twist to real world events. LOVE IT!!
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