San Tan Valley, AZ, United States | Member Since 2012
I was intrigued by the premise of the story but quickly lost interest. I thought the dialogue was repetitive and the storyline boringly predictable. The narrator's performance was fair, but I think her creative talents were hindered by the author's inability to escape circular character exchanges. This storyline might have been improved if written in novella form.
The narrator does a delightful job of enlivening the characters, but the mystery plot is exceptionally weak and clings together with nearly imperceptible threads.
The author's work is most noteworthy for a distinct lack of style. The few good parts were very short and the dull parts were too long. I felt like I was eating an unsalted Saletine while listening.
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