This story barely has a plot. The story line don't really hold together either, it bounces here and there. Overall the story is mushy, pink romantic soup not even Barbara Cartland would have gotten printed. It felt more like a skeleton to a story, than an actual story. The editor should have done some editing.
The performer did a mighty job to try sell this story. Her performance, and that the story was so short, was the only reason for listening to the whole "book". But even the best storyteller can make gold from led.
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