"Annoying narrator"
I would suggest reading this book instead of listening to the audio version.
I would cast someone that could do a better job with women's voices. I would also prefer that the father did not sound like he was 95 years old.
"Maudlin"
I doubt I would listen to another book by Diane Setterfield if the story is similar to The Thirteenth Tale.
The author needs to stop whining about twins and get on with the story.
This book was a drawn-out, painful listen.