"Strong story, but so unrelenting."
The people are believable and the story presses forward to a gloomy, but inevitable conclusion. The issues are compelling.
Now that you ask, I wonder why it was I persisted in finishing the story. Probably because I hoped for redemption somewhere, preferably among the kids.
Crystal
The Doctor's explosion at the Council meeting.
Write more, but please some of the cleverness that lead to Diagonally.