There was very little that could be done to improve this utter nonsense. The characters were shallow un unbelievable and just downright silly.
The narrator. Clearly she is a lover of commas as she inserted them whenever she could, when they clearly did not belong! Some of the sentence structure was totally destroyed by her pauses in the middle of a sentence.
A different narrator would be a good start but rewriting the whole book was necessary.
Disappointment and annoyance
A plot would have made it more enjoyable. I could not even finish it, which is rare for me.
I have as yet to listen to another book by this author, I have one and will get to it soon. It can surely only be an improvement
From the first syllable, Destiny Landon's voice was like listening to a cat cough up a fur ball, you would do almost anything to make it stop!
All of them, they were shallow and vacuous, helped not at all by the female narrator. I could not even bring myself to wait for the sex scenes, the price was too high.
The language was so beautiful, English as it should be spoken. Though the language was old fashioned and quaint, it did not at all detract from the sizzle in the sex scenes
The scene when she finally enjoys the sexual encounter was stunning, I loved it. I would recommend this book to my friends without any hesitation.
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