Writing; Bad dialogue, bad prose and superficial plot, the only positive thing about the writing I can come up with is that Donovan is one tough dude, although the writer doesn't capitalize on that much.
Narration; Orlow does most of it and is solid, Guidall is Guidall (awesome).
I don't know if this is Mr. Locke's first book so maybe the quality improves as he goes, this one feels like a poor first attempt that one would try to improve upon but not publish.
Books like this keep me from reading new writers as this was a waste of my time and money, yep it's that bad.
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