Move the story along. It was laborious. Way too much descriptive detail. Way too much. It didn't really contribute to the value of the story.
This book could have been half the length. There was a great deal of repeating of the text within a few minutes. Sometimes the same idea was repeated three or more times. It was as though the author wanted to "catch the reader up".
I really wanted to like this book, but I really did not. If it's a sequel, I'll avoid companion works. Sorry.
Glenn L. Ladd
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