The writing in this books is atrocious at best. The repetition of phrases alone is enough to make you stop listening, but the way the words are blended together to tell the story is as bad or worse.
If one is to write an S&M book, write something more true to form than fan fiction from someone who knows no better.
The narrator, unfortunately, sounds even more niave and annoying than the main character.
I could find no redeeming qualities for this book or this series.
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