Characters to predictable, story line unfocused , Characters boring and uninteresting,
characters lives were too simple. There was nothing about them to grab your attention , make you want them to succeed or fail. Just add more substance and not rush the endingPut more though into the ending it was poorly executed.
YES, that was the best part of the story. Great Job Shay Moore.
In a better written story line they could all have a place.
My book Club loves Kimberly books, she is a great author. unfortunately this one was not her best. I look forward to reading her next book.
Report Inappropriate Content