I thought the characters were simpering and flip flopped from trying to be strong to being a whimp. The narrator made the book very hard to listen to. I kept waiting for it to get better, but really spent a lot of time rolling my eyes.
I have read other paranormal books that had a great deal more character substance than this. This was a bad harlequin novel
Reading the book MIGHT have helped
It was an original concept having 4 stories in one, but even within each story is was repetitive
Nothing! I barely got through the second story. Her 'men' voices sound more like Gargamel from the Smurfs. Not exactly what you want to hear in an erotic story. Also she moans and caterwauls something awful. Definitely a turnoff!
The middle two stories were poorly written. The first and fourth were somewhat better but not much.
If I wasn't so bored on a 7 hour drive I would not have finished the book and deleted it. I kept thinking it might get better, but it never did.
Absolutely horrible. Having a dominating man in the bedroom is one thing but when they tell you what to where and start taking your BC pills then mentally disturbed comes to mind
It is to bad she had to read such an awful book. Hope she got paid well
Disappointment that any one even liked this and and that a women thought it was ok to write it. I kept thinking after I read it that it was a book used as sample of what an abusive relationship is like if the author I likes this type of relationship she needs professional help
There was about 11/2 hours of story and actual plot in the book. I have read other books in this series and they were not this bad. I felt like I was listening to 10 hours of a descriptive monologue. It wasn't until about 6 hours in was there even a hint of a story. I almost didn't even make it that far. I felt this book was kind of an addition to the series that was just a character thesis nothing more.
Your performance was OK
Not sure that a character cut is in order. It was more that there was so little story. This could have been just a continuing chapter in the previous book about Margariette, not a whole book.
How it was narrated. With both a man and a women narrating and both doing all the parts the story became a bit disjointed. One narrator would have made it easier to listen to.
It was OK. I would recommend the author as long as there was only one narrator.
Heartfelt, sizzling, & page turning.
Zane and Grady are the kind of characters that you love to really delve into. They are flawed, real, and hot!
Zane - He is tough but has a soft center
I really like how he brings the characters out in his speech.
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