This book could have easily been cut down by half. The characters are prone to speechifying. Cassie, especially, seems to be saying the same thing over and over again (and it's rarely interesting enough to merit saying once).
Make it shorter. Also, make Cassie a little more likeable.
The narration was fine. The male narrator was generally less obtrusive.
It sparked several eye rolls in our car, as well as a few questions about why Cassie can't seem to focus on what's important in a given situation (e.g., danger rather than the body of whatever man happens to be in the room).
a great story and wonderfully read by the author.
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