Narrator, yes. Author, no.
This may sound silly to some, but my brain became quickly distracted by the gross repetition of the word "said," and I couldn't concentrate on the plot. "He 'said', Monica 'said', I 'said'...said, said, said.
With all the verbs in the English language, why would anyone release a story highlighting a character's multiple personalities, journey through their dialogue...and NEVER use a synonym for the word "said"? Very strange. I did not enjoy this read at all.
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