A story line, well developed, believable characters, a plot, good writing: all of these things would have made the story better.
This isn't a story, but simply light porn disguised as a story. The most disappointing thing is that I wasted money.
The narrator's speech is a fad/gimmick accent most commonly associated with teenagers.
The scenes are erotic a bit scary and unbelievable.
If you are looking for an erotic, far fetched fantasy and nothing more, then this is the perfect book. I heard a woman at the spa referred to this piece as a self help book.
I do like her books sometimes, but this one is poorly done and she uses the F word why?It just doesn't work.
She was good.
The narrator is wonderful and the likable, familiar characters.
Yes, and he is always great!
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