Female commentator's voice was annoying at times when trying to convey emotion. Story was inter-woven well, but tied up in a bow too easily. Left hanging with Knob Hill connection.
A man who says so much has no stance.
Who is he, really?
Criticism with no potential solutions offered has no value, but to anger those criticized.
Performance had quite a few errors, but the story was not negatively affected. The story is "Criminal Intelligence" with a twist. Very well done.
I put myself into the story and tension built very strongly.Even when not reading. Driving, working, dining...it was in my thoughts. Fantastic
Author paints a vivid picture which I could live in and want to see through to the end.
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