No, I don't think I would change anything. Then I'm a reader, not a writer.
As usual, the main characters jump right into and out of trouble.
I do enjoy his reading for these action adventure stories
I enjoyed the first 2 books of Karen White's. This was like the next installment of mystery and ghosts.
The first 2 books she wrote
The use of many voices. All were very distinctive and I thought fit the characters..
Occasionally I like stories that are different, this one has the slant of seeing ghosts, Even though a lot of the story was predictable, it held my interest. It was a fast read type book
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