"Terminology sometime vague for non military reader"
General layout of surrounding, difficult to get a good mental discription of surroundings raison de terre: (reason for being there).
The attitude of the state of the author's motivations was overlooked. What was the objective?
The continutity of events: realtive to the rational outlook of the author. The discriotion of the flora and fauna.
The foundation or objective was not stated clearly described. A
Title: What was objective this small group of military persons? Title: The Objective of the mission?
This was a reasonably good description of the main theme of warfare but not the longterm reason or objective of the military objective. Was the objective successful?