I loved the plot set up, but it never really went anywhere. Just lots of action that didn't really make sense. There was also no depth to the characters.
Another note - the reader seemed to think that by having some of the characters speak in a very low voice, it would add to the drama of the story or help differentiate the characters. I found it totally annoying! At a normal volume, the whispered voices were difficult to hear over the road noise.
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