Then you might like this novel. Reducing the size of the novel by half - that is apply competent editing and get rid of the useless fluff.
Pointless events on a meandering journey to a nowhere conclusion. The "I'm pregnant" scene is perhaps the most horrid piece of writing I've ever come across. The novel takes deus ex machina to new and remarkable heights.
It droned on and on taking forever to get basically nowhere with lots of boring battles, over-hyped breathy descriptions of irrelevant detail. There really wasn't much of a story.
He did fine
Sadness and disappointment that I'd wasted my money. Anger that I believed the hype about Mr. Banks' work.
Yes, this is a classic tale
The breathy, almost hyperventilating, overwrought female narrator simply ruined every section in which she appeared. Awful, Horrible. Would have rated it a 4 overall if not for her.
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