A better story. A better narration.
Write it the way he writes his other books. With joy and subtlety.
not so sure
All the "I" words. Maybe tell the story from someone else's p.o.v.
I have enjoyed his other books. This was a big disappointment. Even the redemptive act at the end was shallow and obvious and forced...
The man in the wooden hat is the same author, same characters, same story from a different angle. Read this first.
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