"OK story. Narrator needs to execute punctuation."
I would have read it instead of listening to it.
Kind of jumps over time but that could have been the way it was narrated. See next item.
He ran on without regard to commas, periods, exclamation points, or obvious changes in time. From one scene to another there is a ten year jump but because the narrator ran it like a stop sign, it was not evident at first. Sometimes, it was difficult to tell which character was
I'm not sure. I like other Andrew Grey novels and they all seem to have similar themes but this one just didn't grab me.
"Narration is so bad I may not listen to the rest"
Not sure
Authors don't automatically make good narrators.
Sean Crisden! If the author wants to improve his narrative skills, listen to Sean and learn.
I only rated the story and overall a 3 simply because I couldn't get any further in the review without putting something. If I finish the book I hope and can update my review.