It would take a complete overhaul to improve this, starting with a writer who has more than three or four stock phrases at their disposal, and moving to a narrator with even reasonable vocal interest.
Where to start? The story itself? The repetitive, boring language? The completely unrealistic and predictable storyline? The impossibly boring characters?
It's hard to imagine that anything could make the story worse, but the bland voice, coupled with incredibly poor attempts to change her voice for different characters, succeeded remarkably .
Extreme disappointment over the hours of my life wasted here that I'll never recoup.
Riddled with cliches, simultaneously predictable and unbelievable - an over-long Harlequin romance, and very disappointing.
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