The author never explains the fathers relationship with the son, the Vietnam experience, and the father's relationship with the girl. Since it was eluded to that the father was a very good person as a young man, how did he change so drastically? The author got into deep water and tried salvage the story with a politically correct ending, which made no sense. Shame on you........
Make the father more understandable.
no not in this lifetime
The story had some potential, but the author wanted a politically correct ending.. The strong emotions of both sides of the issues were not fully developed.. In addition, the brother who hated the father got his revenge and the little sister was bullied throughout the story and disregarded her position.. In essence it made little sense due to the fact that the exploration of the character's positions were unrealistic.
the narrators were okay
I would not cut, I would have rewrote for continuity of the story line.
What a waste of good story line
THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE DONE SOME TYPE OF RESEARH ON THE LAW OR KEEPED THE STORY LINE SIMPLER.
THE LACK OF THE AUTHOR'S KNOWLEDGE ABOUT ; THE LAW, COMMUNITY PROPERTY, AND PERSONAL RELATIONS.
NOT BAD OR PASSABLE
THE LIGHT HEARTEDNESS OF THE STORY WAS ITS' STRONG POINT.
OVERALL IT BECAME TOO COMPLEX FOR NOVICE A DETECTIVE, WHICH GAVE IT A SCATTER GUN EFFECT. THE AUTHOR SHOUD FLOW CHART EVENT TO GIVE IT MORE REALISM.
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