Curiosity killed the?
Sebastion of course. He just couldn't help himself to do the right thing. He so wanted to remain a bad guy but just really wasn't that person.
I laughed at times that should probably have not been funny.
The run from the bad guys part went on a little longer than I had patience for but I never was one for the chase scenes or on the run scenes in movies. Not unless there is more substance between the characters who are on the run with more moments of interest within them.
Really, please write it as one book or wrap up the first one with a hint of wanting the next but don't end it in the middle of the story. That's just wrong and disrespectful of readers. The story is average. Kept me engaged but drug on with same stuff over and over but liked the characters enough to stay involved in the book as fast forward through it in places. Narration was great.
The book really has little substance and it is another cliff hanger. Ahhh. When will author's ever consider that they can write a complete book and people will buy it? This isn't even close to the quality writing of Maya Banks from a year ago. Not sure what has happened with her writing but she used to be one of my favorites.
Same things over and over again. How much can a couple fight? It was hard to get into the characters for so many reasons. What's up with the point of view change in the middle for a brief moment and then never again. Also, can't a writer just write full book in one instead of one story in 3 books?
Let's see, take the them of Fifty Shades, clean it up a bit, make some changes and publish a story that is just different enough that the author can't be accused of stealing someone else's work.
The story is a little slow as it is. When you put that to a very slow speaker you will have no trouble falling asleep. I found myself increasing the speed on the play but then it sounds funny. It's hard to keep in involved with the story.
She doesn't disappoint, ever! I only wish she would write more books from this period and earlier. They are just so much fun.
I've read most of the stories so far in this series, or so I had thought. I had no idea who most of these people were in this story and I can't believe anyone would find it interesting and fun to drag on through a boring series of women in labor. Waste of time and a credit. Most certainly.
I think that there should definitely be something in the marketing that lets you know that a book is written in multiple parts and you have to buy each one individually. This trend is ridiculous. I feel completely ripped off because now I either do not listen to the whole story or pay 3 times as much as I thought because I now know it is in 3 parts - or I guess it could be more and they just haven't published all of the parts. Really?
I am really tired of publishing companies and authors writing a novel and splitting it into two or three parts to sell for more $. Just charge more for it to begin with and provide the whole story. Really people! I feel ripped off. It just ends with the biggest cliff hanger. Seems like Fifty Shades started this trend it is getting worse all the time.
It's hard to tell if the story would be better because the narrator had a cadence of reading 3 or 4 words at a time and dragging out the 4th word to be longer the 2 syllables. No one talks like this so why did she read like this. The male voices were more feminine than the female voices but the worst part was the cadence. It's like really fast 'talking about' then really long childrennnnnnnnnn. It's awful. I would think that the good folks at audible would actually listen to their narrators before publishing a book and charging people for it. Very disappointing.
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