More sympathetic characters, less grade school level cursing and insults.
If this is indicative of his usual work, then no.
He actually did an alright job, considering the super ultra tough guy and other boring cliches he had to work with. It was a little silly that he gave a Mexican accent to everyone who had a Hispanic sounding name.
I was mostly just bored. Stark isn't even remotely interesting or likeable.
Honestly, this book almost reads like some relabeled self-insert fan fiction. Stark is just about perfect in every way, has all kinds of amazing powers, no weaknesses, always has some (amazingly stupid) one liner, but the greatest thing is how he becomes immune to any attack after he survives it once.
To be fair, I was laughing pretty much any time a character talked about their state of the art Blackberries.
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