No way Jose! the first book wasn't bad but this one focuses to much on pedophile behaviour, damn can't you perverts just write a story, without getting all lathered up.
Just it sucks!!!
A total rewrite!!!!
The narration just plain sucked, the voice just, we'll sucked.
What can I say.
Could barely stand to listen to narrators voice
not anymore of this- can i get my credit back.
Gee- i don't know mybe his voice sucked.
The whole book- it was just stupid
You should be ashamed charging people for this trash.
Probably will travel alot, was entertaining, good storyline.
Red Dawn good storyline very pro-american.
No first one
No over a day driving
Give it a try
Cut out all the bull about her struggle with sex- what crap- did this author have an aggenda or issue with it.
Not if the writing continues on the same course.
Cut out all refrences to her sex life and stick with the story line
Gee I guess I already said that.
Will not be wasting anymore dollars here
ITWILL DO IF NOTHING ELSE IS AVAILABLE TO READ.
Maybe- but doubt it.
What else can I say- it was a bad book.
The way the writer drags you into the story- makes you feel you are involved.
His reading helps the overall objectives of the writer- to get you involved- you become one of the characters, whether the lead or just an observer- you are there.
No just anticipation of the flow of the story.
Be patient allow the characters to develop, not in a dragging along way, but wait for them to mature, let the circumstances of the story move them to be the heroes and villians the story itself demands.
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