Take the overly sexual content out.
I have "Divergent" & "Four", both of which I really enjoyed. But this book is way more mature and sexual as far as Tris and Four's relationship. They are supposed to be about 16 & 18 years old, and to take their relationship there is something I don't care to read about (personally). I certainly would not want my teenage sisters to be reading this.
I'll be exchanging it for something with better content. I place a high priority on putting good things into my mind and this isn't what I'd consider as meeting that standard.
I LOVE Emma Galvin's voice.
The sexual scenes between Four & Tris, leaving the dialogue between them and cutting the other stuff. Too much "hand under the shirt" nonsense, and then the whole scene when they have sex.
I enjoy a good romance, but leave out the sexual stuff please.
THIS WAS A GREAT BOOK!!! This series was one of the best ever, every time I attempted to put it down I ended of picking it up minutes later. I can't believe tris died though sad but it made a good ending. Keep making more wonderful novels.
This is just SO GREAT! I love this author! Pretty insightful into human character, love it! The performances are SUPERB! Just absolutely wonderful!