The introduction to the individual characters. The author describes the prominent pack members' personalities very well without detracting from the main characters, Tray & Taryn. I loved that the author reminded us throughout the story that both Tray & Taryn were dominant in their own rite; that Tray was very much a dominant canine with Taryn and his pack but that Taryn did not loose her dominance except with Tray.
I am looking forward to more from this author - hope the next in the series is not too long in coming.
Nothing. I thought the narrator was great.
Would like more.
Few Favorite Authors: P Briggs, J Frost, D Jones, M Harper, J Estep, D Duvall, C Harris, F Hunter, E James, J Rain, I Andrews
Laughable in its pre-adolescent writing style, that is, unless you are a pre-adolescent and/or writing for that group. Especially not good when dealing with decidedly adult content. The several chapters I could tolerate, miserably failed at delivering the needed sexual tension to carry the storyline.
Narration is terrible! But to be fair, I'm not sure anyone could have made this text much better... But at this point, I would not choose to listen to this narrator again.
At first listen (the sample), the book seemed it might have an interesting story and might still be one to explore, but the dialogue and sexual interest felt flat, forced and canned. Something like the first attempts of a young teen trying to write pornography; coarse, no build-up of emotion or tension; no layers.
And to clarify, I'm so NOT a prude when it comes to my choices in reading material...I truly enjoy reading a mature, well-written sex scene as much as the next healthy adult female. Seduction is a wonderfully compelling art form and, done with some finesse, elicits tingles, smiles and deliciously genuine heat in the reader. But, the dialogue and sex scenes in the first several chapters of this book (because that's as far as I could get before ripping my headphones from my shaking head while muttering about losing time from from life that I'll never get back!) is clumsy, crass and lacks anything that would entice me to ever want to come back for more.
... ridiculous and hilarious (and not in a good way)!
I had to return this book. This chick/heroine was so annoying. I like sarcasm and strong female characters.... but really???!!!! Always a total complete sarcastic bitch to the point where you can't even like her is a disappointment. Sorry.
Characters are flat and iconic. The dialog was trite and unimaginative. The story was an afterthought and the erotic scenes were shifted into without warning and at inappropriate times. These things were compounded by an unemotional and dry reading.
I have read better fan fiction, most of which is horribly written, but at least it's free! The plot is formulaic and paper thin, as are the characters. The sex is crude porn, which might be OK if the main character didn't come off like a 16-year-old girl. Oh, excuse me, a "feisty" little thing that learns how to be a "good girl" and "take it" (while shouting "no" and calling her man every curse word the author could think of). To add insult to injury, Wright constantly insults the reader's intelligence by saying Taryn's a strong, independent woman.
If you're after base, unimaginative sex with heavy male dominance and a side of fantasy, I guess this book is for you. Ditto if you're a regular paranormal romance reader/listener who wants to try something more hardcore. If you have any interest in plots, action, love, character development, romance, strong female characters, or engaging dialogue, keep looking.
The heroin in this novel is immensely unlikable! Although she is supposed to be tough, smart and charmingly impudent, she comes off as smart-mouthed, bitchy, and disrespectful. In addition, the attraction felt by her mate for her was simply not plausible. With the main character being such a negative harpy, it was hard to find anything redeeming in the book.
Fantasy, sci-fi, Motorcycles, and my granddaughter. And I am a rail road engineer.
Less graphic sex scenes. The story itself was good. But the sex scenes were far too long, far too graphic, far too often. In fact, in fact, this author makes Laurel K Hamilton look like a children's writer.Mind you, I have nothing against a good sex scene where it's called for, but this author just went way over the top. Instead of adding to the plot, she distracted from it. A shame too, because this book really had the makings of being a good series.
I don't know. Perhaps if the sex scenes were toned down a bit. The story itself is not bad.
Her performance was average. She seemed to get into the different parts, but the voices all sounded the same. Perversely enough, her best performance was the sex scenes..
If graphic sexual descriptions offend you, this is definitely not the series for you.
Wow this book was so entertaining on so many levels. This book came as a big surprise for me. I started not so excited about this book but willing to give it a chance..it ended up well worth the credit and then some. I can't remember the last time a book had me heaving in great belly laughs, not just once but several times throughout the book. The heroine in this story has a quick, sharp and sarcastic wit that had me thoroughly charmed. This book also has a lot of hot animal sex, which is a definite bonus for me but may not be a plus for everyone else, but it's not just sex...there is also quite a bit of sweet romance. All together makes an irresistible paranormal romance package that has me on the edge of my seat waiting for book 2!! Well done Ms. Wright!! Well done!
Love Romantic Erotica with a twist , thrill, suspense and a great story !
I loved this book ! Not too much into the "paranormal" love series but this was a GREAT starter to something I may totally enjoy! I had a hard time turning this book off, constantly wanting to keep going and definitely didn't want it to end ! Great suspense leading up to a great battle at the end ! The narration was excellent and made each character totally individual and loved this ALPHA female , Taryn ! Trey and her were HOT HOT HOT!
Can't wait for the second book to come to Audible ....hurry !!!!
Well worth a credit ...and I got it on sale !!!
*~*~* I love all books erotica and romance. *~*~* A book is my safe place.
Yes , I would listen again. I bought the book last year, and loved the story then..How much better to be able to listen to this story, while doing my daily things
I bought the story last year on my kindle, and loved everything about this book..loved the big bad Alpha, so hot and hot sexy bed sceans.funny, romantic, sad, and a bunch of misfit wolves finding the best in each other and coming out on top.
She did an awesome job..she was true to each of the characters
The moment they realized they were true mates, found love, and knew their past ( so called mates were all lies )
A great Alpha love story, great smexy scenes, two misunderstood wolves finding themselves, love and a hope for the future..loved this story .Hope there will be more to this pack in future storys.