The same phrases used over and over and over and over (pulled me in for a deep kiss). The main character that didn't have a clue, and couldn't make a choice.
The narrator's teenage phrasing (a rise at the end of sentences that weren't questions).
A hope that this girl would grow up
I was bored to tears trying to listen to this book. The narrator I am sure did her best with the story but it was repetitive and just went on and on with no true end in sight. I have to admit that I gave up on reading it close to the end. I just could not take it any more. I will not be reading the other books in the series. Don't waste your credit on this one.
Really really young women that don't mind a very immature lead character.
Keira was just so annoying I couldn't get past her. The constant flip flopping, acting like she was torn apart by hurting Denny and Kellan but still doing it... and getting more and more horrible. Her constant statements of "irritation flashed through me" really drove me crazy.
Everything that entailed her begging for Kellan to stay, and Keira sneaking into Kellan's room while Denny slept.... pretty much every scene after Denny came back.
This book would have been way better if the tension between Kellan and Keira went on longer without acting on it. And if Keira could have just made a decision and been a grown up, independent person with the ability to take care of herself. she was just so weak and incapable of doing anything by herself... like starting school by herself or Denny being gone a couple of months... she couldn't cope with ANYTHING without a man which is why she cheated on Denny within hours of "breaking up". It was just ridiculous. I like this genre normally, so immature content isn't beneath me, but this was just beyond immature and lame.
Kiera. WTH! I could follow along with the story up through the first "indiscretion". I even could side with her at that point but after that, I just wanted to slap her and turn off the book. I struggled through more and more of the book and the frustration just kept dragging on. Sure there was passion in the book but it wasn't enough to compensate for the rest of the story.
None. Denny was oblivious in the beginning (but "perfect" the remaining time), Kellan was vindictive and, honestly, the one who let the whole "cuddling" thing start in the first place, and I've already voiced my issues with Kiera.
I've always been a avid reader so now I'm a avid listener. I prefer the paranormal genre but I do like to switch things up. It's boring if you don't have variety. Of course I do love the romance and the hotter the better. Also, you can't beat a good thriller filled with suspense and a ending you can't even guess at until the very end.
Wow, this one put me through the ringer. Kiera is a young woman who has moved far away from her family with Denny. Denny is the only man she has ever been with and he is her first love. They move in with Kellan. Kiera is attracted to Kellan.Something happens (don't want to spoil the story) and she has sex with Kellan and the emotional rollercoaster begins.
Other reviews think badly of Kiera but I see her as an inexperienced young woman who loves Denny with a young girls love, but loves Kellan with a woman’s love and has no idea how to deal with this. In my opinion this is so similar to situations to life. Life isn’t black or white, its shades of grey and everyone deals with things their own way. Kiera is on the verge of becoming a woman and she loves two men.
This is a great listen. I was on the edge of my seat, knowing what she should do, wondering what she would do. I felt so bad for Denny, Kellan and Kiera. It is so similar to life. I felt like it was a credit well spent.
Hot romance/Sci Fi we're so lucky to have Audible to feed our book addictions. I love walking my precious dog Sydney & listening to my books
This was a very poorly written and preformed book. The story is pathetic with a stupid main lead Kera. She was such a baby about everything. The two boy's were just as bad. The book was so drawn out and way to long for all the dribble in it. The narrator was not good and sounded board most the time with a horrible empty tinny sound. Not recorded properly sounding like she was recording in a tunnel or something like. I would not recommend wasting a credit on this one.
This was such a hard book to listen too. So much unnecessary pain. I loved Keelan and Denny but I just couldn't love Kierra. She was selfish and I don't think she deserved either of them. She should have let one go way earlier in the book and could have still felt torn but not like a greedy selfish cheater. How can she ever prove her love to Keelan now to much damage has been done. I gave Keelan and Denny and star but that's all I got.
My way in learning to relax is to read or to be read to audiblly!
No it's too predictable and continues to go in circles going no where.
Jodi Ellen Malpas "One night Denied"
It depends on the book!
This was not what I thought
The book...what I listened to...just too nauseating to finish....was terrible. No real characters, absolutely no plot....what was the point??
Nothing, obviously she thoughtlessly thought this was a good effort and believe it or not someone published it! And there are sequels!! There may be an audience who would enjoy it, doesn't include me.
I would never suggest any narrator that I like and enjoy to put their voice to this book
How about the whole thing.
My opinion is that this book is a complete fail from start to where ever it went. I just found it didn't go anywhere from page one and the fact there are other books continuing this plot-less boring book boggles my mind. Just my opinion, if you like it, have at it.